Erin
Prazan
aka the Red Phoenix
Red
“Uh oh, the Queen of Doom is coming.” Gulped Brad as Melanie continued to come
closer. But just as they were preparing
to run, a girl with wavy brown hair called to her, “Hey Melanie, Kristen
wants to speak with you.” Melanie
gave Bit and Brad one last scornful look, turned on her heel, and walked
away. “Woo, that was
close.” Sighed Bit as they relaxed
once again.
“Yeah, I’m glad that’s all over; I thought she was
going to hurt you two.”
The two guys turned their heads to see Naomi Flugal and Leon Toros
standing just a few feet away. “
Bit and
“Wow that was
fun.” Said Kelly Tasker as they
sat down for a rest. “Yeah, I
can’t move, let’s have a break.” Chris Tasker moaned. Bit agreed, his leg
was killing him. He had popped in a
couple pain killers he had brought but they hadn’t started working
yet. They sat until the girls felt
rested and stronger and when Bit’s pain killers started working. Then they headed off to the haunted house at
the far back of the fair grounds. It
sure looked like a haunted house when they arrived. It was large and black, with boarded up
windows and rotting hands sticking out of them.
“This place gives me the creeps.” Gulped Leena as she, much to the distaste of
Harry, grasped Bit’s arm.
“Don’t worry, just relax.” Bit replied as they entered; “Besides
I’ll be right beside you every step of the way.” Leena gulped again. Bit had way too much experience with Leena in
scary situations like this. When Leena
had answered an e-mail from the “Chainsaw Man” they had threatened
to chop up her Zoid. She was so scared
for her Gun Sniper and for the fact that a ghost was coming after her that she
passed out three times, standing up! She
even screamed when Dr.Toros revved up a new chainsaw he had gotten for the yard
work. As they walked down the dark hallways, Leena continued to clutch
Bit’s arm so hard that he was losing feeling in it. “Leena, could you be a dear and LOSEN
THE GRIP ON MY ARM!” Leena,
shocked, let go of Bit’s arm and fell in step with him. “Sing something, it will help you calm
down, from what I don’t know.”
So Leena began to sing softly.
“I’ve lost, that loving feeling, whoa, that loving
feeling. I’ve lost that loving
feeling. Oh gone, gone, gone, whoa ooo
ooo.” Bit smiled and continued
walking. Soft “ooooing”
sounds filled the air as they continued.
Then, a huge zombie shot out from the open grave in the floor. “AAAAAHHHHH!!!” Screamed Leena and Bit as they clutch on to
one another, hearing Brad and Naomi’s screams behind them. They calmed down after the zombie sunk slowly
back into the ground. “Wow, that
thing looked real.” Gasped Jack as
he showed up silently behind them, making them all jump. “Don’t sneak up on us like
that.” Scolded Bit as they turned angrily toward him.
“Sorry.”
They sighed and continued down the hallway, screams echoing form the
corridor, blood freezing screams that chilled your bones and made your blood
run cold.
“Now that sounded real!”
They continued up the passage way toward the sounds, knowing they had
to be animated, as the screams sounded metallic. But as they rounded a corner, a man swerved
around the corner, a gun in his hand, which was pointing straight at Bit! “Bit Cloud, time for my
revenge!” But before Bit could
make a move, the gun fired hitting him in the chest.